Some pointers on Writing for Children

I was reading a book written by a educator. It was written from the point of view of a twelve year old boy. One of the things I noticed was his use of vocabulary. I thought he used some words that would not be in a twelve year old boy's vocabulary. We have to be careful that we don't go above the vocabulary of the point of view character.

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